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Suggestions for how to provide review feedback to…
Suggestions for how to provide review feedback to express that wordiness and passive voice preclude understandability? #phdchat#ecrchat
2 thoughts on “Suggestions for how to provide review feedback to…”
@JeffreyKeefer Pick a few sentences and ask “who is doing this (the verb)?” Recommend starting sentence with that subject. #phdchat #ecrchat
@JeffreyKeefer Pick a few sentences and ask “who is doing this (the verb)?” Recommend starting sentence with that subject. #phdchat #ecrchat
@LUDissertation @JeffreyKeefer plus, to teach students to identify passive voice (and make them smile) ask them to try adding “by zombies”