Jeffrey…nice to see you looking at your Personal Value Proposition (PVP) and putting it to the audience for review! \Sarah makes soem great points, so my question would be around ‘who is your target audience?’ be specific here…is it the learning and development manage in a financial services company or the head of a department at the local university? Get that clear, and then try again. I personally think phrases like ‘postmodern thinking’ are for knobs. People will pass judgement on your 11 times in 5 seconds, so make sure your PVP evokes an emotion in your target audience in the first 5 seconds so you get their minds focused on your story (i.e. what are you trying to sell). For my 2 cents worth…”I challenge people to learn” is a little closer to what floats my boat?